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Interesting discussion.   Two themes I'd like to pick up on:

    Tone, Determinism & Character
    Messages & The Lion the Witch & the Wardrobe

I haven't read Wicked from cover to cover, instead I've started
skipping around, kind of enjoying bits, a bit, but hoping to find something
that really engages me and pulls me in and along.   No joy.
Wondering about WHY - I think I can puzzle an answer out
of what people have already said.

Margaret McBride:
    The book is also too deterministic in a way that
    doesn't add to my understanding of humans.  The characters are either so
    shaped by their relationships with their parents and/or some conniving
    character/Fate that they seem to lose too much free will.

Maryelizabeth Hart:
    Did anyone else find WICKED hard going because of the language/author's
    voice/whatever? I gave up not too far in because while I was interested
    in the concept, the writing wasn't holding my attention.

I'm not sure whether it's the tone, or the determinism of the characters,
or some combination of both, that I'm reacting to.  (More like..not reacting
to....  ;-).

Revisionism can be a wonderful lens (e.g. Flush...).
I'd be interested in any recommendations for re-tellings of fairy stories,
that have a BDG slant.

But here, I'm not sure what I'm seeing with it.

Marie Shanahan (who liked the book anyway):
   I couldn't quite see the point of it- it
    didn't seem to be intended to be taken seriously, but wasn't funny- and
one
    things for sure, it didn't enlighten this reader any as to the nature of
    evil.

Marie's comparison with The Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe is thought
provoking for me....

With The Lion WW, I've gone through multiple phases, as I've read it every
five years or so since I was 8.    First time round I was oblivious to the
Christian message - next time round it stuck out so I couldn't see the
story!
I didn't like it and thought 'ugh how *dare* he sneak that in and make me
digest it when I was too young to know different...not FAIR'.  Subsequent
re-readings have got these elements more in balance - and I've come to
appreciate the Christian message more than the first time I saw it.

But what I really like about the book, when I'm in a phrase where I'm not
narked by the emblems, etc, are the characters, and how they play out in
plot,
and how they relate to the themes of choice and redemption.

With Wicked, I'm kind of interested in Elphaba, in a distant kind of way.
But I don't turn the page thinking 'what next?', or 'oh, no! say it ain't
so!'.

I'm skipping around in another book right now, Viriconium, which I picked up
in a SF Masterworks re-issue.   For richness of language, and setting,
I've seldom read anything to beat it.   But the characters don't reach out
to me.
So, as with Wicked, I'm skipping around in it, thinking, hm, yeah, that's
interesting.
But I don't forget I'm reading.

cheers,
    Heather

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Like many others I am currently half way through the book and finding it
hard going. I wanted to come in on this thread because I think I know the
answer. It's to do with the technical issue of the author's handling of
viewpoint.

For non-writers on the list, Point-of-View (POV) is something that writers
get terribly excited about, and which readers only notice when they find
that the story 'isn't working'.

Even when writing in third person a writer is wisest to stick with one
character per scene. Only the things that character sees are described. Only
that character's thoughts are given as quotes. Jumping from character to
character (known as head-hopping) is most often seen in the work of novice
writers. I've read scenes where the POV changes with each paragraph. It is
very bad practice and leaves the reader feeling like a tennis ball.

However sometimes a writer needs to give more than one POV. For example if
the plot contains a heated argument, and the writer wants to show both
sides. One technique for this would be to give the argument from one of the
antagonists POV, and then in the next section (with a line space to mark the
switch) go to the second character a short while later and have them
brooding over what they should have said.

There is another option for the writer, and this is what Maguire has done,
which is to go for the 'god's eye viewpoint'. The author, Nigel Watts,
describes it: "A truly omniscient viewpoint hovers above the story, the
reader listening to character's thoughts like a telepathic eavesdropper" He
then goes on to say, "The disadvantage of a god's eye view is significant:
the reader, like the narrator, can float above the scene, passing through
walls like a ghost, never really getting involved. If your intention is to
produce a cool, perhaps ironic tone, this distance may be in your favour. If
you have an emotional tale to tell you may find the effect is the opposite
of intense."

Briefly. in the section 'Boq' we were allowed inside Boq's head, and I
started to connect with the story. However the POV has drifted outwards
again and I am left feeling that the characters are all at the other end of
a very long barge-pole. If this is Elphaba's story then I would like it told
from her POV.


Jane

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I just finished *Wicked* on my lunch break at work. I feel a little sick.

I'm surprised that no one else has mentioned how *nasty* this book is! It
seemed that every time I turned the page I came across another
stomach-turning example of hypocrisy, blinkered prejudice, oppression. That
is, when the more obvious lynchings, war crimes and torture weren't taking
center stage. I know that's a bit of an exaggeration, but it captures my
impression of the book -- a snapshot of life in a despotic and decadent
society. I've never read any of the Oz books, but I can easily see why you
hated it, Robin. As it is, I'm hovering on the line between queasy and
outraged.

It's not that I generally object to bad things happening in fiction. But the
way that Maguire offhandedly tossed them in, heaping worse upon bad, then
never resolved any of the outrage, made me feel as if there was no higher
purpose beyond trying to shock. As an example -- why on earth include the
scene in the Philosopher's Club? It is mentioned a couple of times later on
in the book, but with never an explanation of why it might be significant.
Elphaba wasn't even there. But I guess the trashing of Oz wouldn't have been
complete without a little live porn thrown in to show just how
degenerate these wretches really are.

I do have more to say about this book, but I just had to get this off my
chest first. Consider me unburdened. ;)


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"...the public and the private worlds are inseparably connected;
the tyrannies and servilities of the one are the tyrannies and
servilities of the other." Virginia Woolf, Three Guineas

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Re: POV

Interesting diagnosis...

POV is a bit of a chicken and egg thingy:

- what you feel, as a reader, in the way of empathy/suspense
-various stylistic mechanisms for conveying POV -
both direct and indirect.

and it's also possible to feel a strong POV and yet not feel
empathy/immersion.

and all this is hard
to unscramble...

        ;-)
            Heather

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She will apparently be on briefly, maybe Very Briefly, being interviewed? by
Alan Cheuse, NPR's professional softie as book reviewer (personally, one of
the more irritable people I've ever met, fwthat'sw), in the course of his
recommendation of gift books.

Those without radio access may find live or archive files as www.NPR.org.

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